I very like this photography! Think your vision is right of a probably nice moment in summer, you captured well this innocent pleasure of a child in the sprinkler; it's why I give your four. For the originality, it's somewhere a classical portrait with this touch of originality but this have been shooted with a great technique; this why I give you 3.5 for the originality and four for the technique. This photography have a positive impact for me, I have a very good global impression on this work, the moment, the expression of the child and the good humor you let feel through this photography and that why I estimated the impact of 4.
Globally a very nice work!